Friday, February 26, 2010

Writing a news story

1. What can I write about? What is news?

Choosing what's news can be harder.

The reporter chooses stories from the flood of information and events happening in the world and in their community. Stories are normally selected because of their importance, emotion, impact, timeliness and interest. Note: all these factors do NOT have to coincide in each and every story!

2. Identify what kind of a story it is

Hard news (+/- 600 words): This is how journalists refer to news of the day. It is a chronicle of current events/incidents and is the most common news style on the front page of your typical newspaper.

It starts with a summary lead. What happened? Where? When? To/by whom? Why? (The journalist's 5 W's). It must be kept brief and simple, because the purpose of the rest of the story will be to elaborate on this lead.

Keep the writing clean and uncluttered. Most important, give the readers the information they need. If the federal government announced a new major youth initiative yesterday, that's today's hard news.

Soft news (+/-600 words): This is a term for all the news that isn't time-sensitive. Soft news includes profiles of people, programs or organizations. As we discussed earlier, the "lead" is more literary. Most of YPP's news content is soft news.

Feature (+/-1500 words): A news feature takes one step back from the headlines. It explores an issue. News features are less time-sensitive than hard news but no less newsworthy. They can be an effective way to write about complex issues too large for the terse style of a hard news item. Street kids are a perfect example. The stories of their individual lives are full of complexities which can be reflected in a longer piece.

Features are journalism's shopping center. They're full of interesting people, ideas, color, lights, action and energy. Storytelling at its height! A good feature is about the people in your community and their struggles, victories and defeats. A feature takes a certain angle (i.e. Black youth returning to church) and explores it by interviewing the people involved and drawing conclusions from that information. The writer takes an important issue of the day and explains it to the reader through comments from people involved in the story.

Hint: Remember to "balance" your story. Present the opinions of people on both sides of an issue and let the readers make their own decision on who to believe. No personal opinions are allowed. The quotes from the people you interview make up the story. You are the narrator.

Editorial: The editorial expresses an opinion. The editorial page of the newspaper lets the writer comment on issues in the news. All editorials are personal but the topics must still be relevant to the reader.

The structure of a news story (hard & soft news & features) is simple: a lead and the body.

The lead
One of the most important elements of news writing is the opening paragraph or two of the story. Journalists refer to this as the "lead," and its function is to summarize the story and/or to draw the reader in (depending on whether it is a "hard" or "soft" news story - See below for the difference between these two genres of news stories).

In a hard news story, the lead should be a full summary of what is to follow. It should incorporate as many of the 5 "W's" of journalism (who, what, where, when and why) as possible. (e.g. "Homeless youth marched down Yonge St. in downtown Toronto Wednesday afternoon demanding the municipal government provide emergency shelter during the winter months." - Can you identify the 5 W's in this lead?)

In a soft news story, the lead should present the subject of the story by allusion. This type of opening is somewhat literary. Like a novelist, the role of the writer is to grab the attention of the reader. (e.g. "Until four years ago, Jason W. slept in alleyways...") Once the reader is drawn in, the 5 "W's" should be incorporated into the body of the story, but not necessarily at the very top.

The body
The body of the story involves combining the opinions of the people you interview, some factual data, and a narrative which helps the story flow. A word of caution, however. In this style of writing, you are not allowed to "editorialize" (state your own opinion) in any way.

4. Further tips for news writing

Finding story ideas

  • Keep your eyes and ears open; listen to what your friends are talking about.

  • Read everything you can get your hands on; get story ideas from other newspapers and magazines.

  • Think of a youth angle to a current news story.

  • Research a subject that interests you ask yourself what you would like to know more about.

  • Talk to people in a specific field to find out what is important to them.

Newsgathering

  • Begin collecting articles on your subject.

  • Talk to friends and associates about the subject.

  • Contact any agencies or associations with interest or professional knowledge in the area.

  • Create a list of people you want to interview; cover both sides of the story by interviewing people on both sides of the issue.

  • Collect government statistics and reports on the subject get old press releases or reports to use as background.

Interviewing do's and don'ts

  • Be polite.

  • Explain the ground rules of the interview to people unfamiliar with how the media works - this means that you tell them the information they give you can and will be published. If they do not want any part of what they say published, they need to tell you it is "off the record."

  • Tape the interview (so if anyone comes back at you, you have the proof of what was said).

  • Build a relationship with the person being interviewed.

  • Start with easy questions; end with difficult questions.

  • Read the body language of the person you're interviewing and if they get defensive, back away from the question you are asking and return later.

  • Don't attack the source.

  • Keep control of the interview; don't let the subject ramble or stray from the subject.

  • On the other hand, don't let your "opinion" of what the story should be colour the interview. Always remember that the person you are talking with knows more about the subject than you do.

Organizing the information

  • Gather your notes, interviews and research into a file.

  • Review your notes.

  • Look for a common theme.

  • Search your notes for good quotes or interesting facts.

  • Develop a focus.

  • Write the focus of the article down in two or three sentences.

Writing and editing

  • Remember you are the narrator, the story teller.

  • Don't be afraid to rewrite.

  • Be as clear and concise in the writing as possible.

  • Avoid run-on sentences.

  • Be direct.

  • Tell a good story.

  • Tell the reader what you think they want to know.

  • Always ask yourself what the story is about.

  • Read the story out loud; listen carefully.

Steps

1. Find a topic

2. Find an angle

3. Collect info

4. Gather interviews

5. Write story

6. Edit

Wednesday, February 24, 2010

Tuesday, February 16, 2010

Law And Ethics

1. What are the 5 freedoms of the 1st ammendment?
Speech, religion, press, assembly, petition

2. What is the Tinker Standard?
Student speech cannot be censored as long as it does not "materially disrupt class work or involve subtantial disorder or invasion of rights of others"

3. What is the Frasier Standard? Inappropiate speech for class presidant
Because school officials have an "interest in teaching student the boundaries of sociallt appropiate behavior" they can censor student speech that is vulgar or indecent, even if it does not cause a "material or substantial disruption"

4. What is the Hazelwood Standard?
Censorship of school sponsored student expression is permissable when school officials can show that it is "reasonably related to legitimate pedagogical concerns"

5. What is the Frederick Standard?
January 2002, Olympic Torch travels through town

Principal cancels school

Seniors unveil banner on sidewalk across street which reads "Bong hits 4 jesus"

Suspended for 10 days

6. What is the definition of libel?
"There is no legal justification for censoring a student's expression in the privacy of his home."


Elements of Libel
-defamatory statement (hurts persons reputation)
-published to atleast one other person
-concerning the plantiff
-false statement of fact
-made with fault

Tuesday, February 9, 2010

What is the company?
PlayStation 2
Who is the target audience:
Gamers (males 18-30 years old)
What persuasive method used (humor, action, celebrity, human interest, etc.)?
Humor, action
How were camera shots and editing used to enhance the message?
Quick edits
What is the slogan/message for the company?
Live in your world, play in ours
Was the message effective? Why or why not?
Yes, it was funny and got my attention

What is the company?
Budweiser
Who is the target audience:
Football fans
What persuasive method used (humor, action, celebrity, human interest, etc.)?
Animals and humor
How were camera shots and editing used to enhance the message?
The rewind
What is the slogan/message for the company?
No slogan
Was the message effective? Why or why not?
Yes because of the punch line

What is the company?
Chrysler
Who is the target audience:
Females
What persuasive method used (humor, action, celebrity, human interest, etc.)?
Celebrity
How were camera shots and editing used to enhance the message?
Sleek and smooth
What is the slogan/message for the company?
No slogan
Was the message effective? Why or why not?
No, I'm a guy

What is the company?
Pepsi
Who is the target audience:
Pop drinkers
What persuasive method used (humor, action, celebrity, human interest, etc.)?
Humor and celebrity
How were camera shots and editing used to enhance the message?

What is the slogan/message for the company?
Its a twist on a great thing
Was the message effective? Why or why not?


What is the company?
FedEx
Who is the target audience:
People who use shipping companies
What persuasive method used (humor, action, celebrity, human interest, etc.)?
irony, humor
How were camera shots and editing used to enhance the message?
music
What is the slogan/message for the company?
FedEx
Was the message effective? Why or why not?
yes because it shows the company is dedicated

What is the company?
Dodge
Who is the target audience:
Car buyers
What persuasive method used (humor, action, celebrity, human interest, etc.)?
humor
How were camera shots and editing used to enhance the message?
shot behind spit on window
What is the slogan/message for the company?
Grab life by the horns
age effective? Why or why not?
yes it was it showed how powerful the truck is



persuasive method used (humor, action, celebrity, human interest, etc.)?
celebrity

were camera shots and editing used to enhance the message?
quick cuts

at is the slogan/message for the company?
it is in you?

Was the message effective? Why or why not?
yes it did
what is the company?
Sports Center

Who is the target audience:
sports viewers

What persuasive method used (humor, action, celebrity, human interest, etc.)?
celebrity

How were camera shots and editing used to enhance the message?
found ring in soup

What is the slogan/message for the company?
This is SportsCenter

Was the message effective? Why or why not?
kind of, it was a little confusing

What is the company?
H&R Block

Who is the target audience:
tax payers

What persuasive method used (humor, action, celebrity, human interest, etc.)?
celebrity

How were camera shots and editing used to enhance the message?
quick cuts

What is the slogan/message for the company?
Dont get bad advice

Was the message effective? Why or why not?
it was a bit confusing


What is the company?
Bud Light

Who is the target audience:
beer drinkers

What persuasive method used (humor, action, celebrity, human interest, etc.)?
humor

How were camera shots and editing used to enhance the message?
view of on lookers faces

What is the slogan/message for the company?
make it a bud light

Was the message effective? Why or why not?
yes, humor is the best


What is the company?
Visa

Who is the target audience:
credit card users
What persuasive method used (humor, action, celebrity, human interest, etc.)?
celebrity

How were camera shots and editing used to enhance the message?
looking up at him being so tall
What is the slogan/message for the company?
it will get you in out and on with life
Was the message effective? Why or why not?
yes, humor

Wednesday, February 3, 2010

Definition:
Define “Journalism” in 1-3 sentences.

It is the telling of current events that are news worthy through Internet, radio, television, magazine or newspaper.

Wednesday, February 3, 2010

Definition:
Define “Journalism” in 1-3 sentences.
current events that are news worthy. You can broadcast through internet, radio and televsion.



List and describe the six criteria of newsworthiness.

TITLE DESCRIPTION EXAMPLE
1 Signifigance- important events that impact alot of people. 9/11.

2. Proximity- events that are close to home. Daily weather in Eagan.

3. Timleliness- events that are current, happening right now. Car accident on 35E during rush hour.

4. Prominance- news about famous people. Kristin Stewart and Rob Pattinson's romantic relationship.


5. Unusualness- things that do not usually happen.

6. Human interest- news that appeals to the audience. Baby panda being born at zoo.




What are the advantages of print journalism?
1. print gives more info

2. choose what you want to read

3. choose when you read it


What are the advantages of broadcast journalism?

1.live and gives up to date information

2. free

3. video brings it to life


Why has online journalism (convergent media) become so popular?
best of both worlds. You can have very detailed stories, video, everything. You can do everything at once. All the stories you want are right there.