Peer edits

Amanda Rickert


1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
yes, she believes that Obama health care plan needs to be cheaper and have different ideas

2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
yes, she proposes they go back to the drawing board and consider other things

3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
Not too much, you could maybe expand on that
4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
Yes it is, it is something that adresses our whole country
5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
yes
6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
yes
7. Is the writing clear?
yes, it states an obvious viewpoint


Sarah Wiley

1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
Yes, she believes the use of "gay" and "no homo" should be stopped
2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
Yes, simply intruct the sayings are offensive
3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
Yes

4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
Yes, effects everyone

5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
Yes

6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
Yes

7. Is the writing clear?
yes, interesting